jtza8's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[-In Memory-]

Awesome :)

Beautiful, and I'm sure, quite hard to get right. I'm a total noob, but I hope what I say might make sense, and if not, then at least provoke a thought. :P

Might the attack of the strings be a little too slow on the chords following the chord at the end of 0:52? Would variation on the attack provide more leverage for emotion?

Mrmilkcarton responds:

An instrument that held more of a melody would of lead to more emotion probably. I'm still working on understanding and faking classical music to sound real and good.

[Awake - Believe]

Love the song

It's just a little tricky to classify, it starts off as hard trance, then goes back to normal trance. This kinda sucker-punches the listener a bit. Which may, or may not be a good thing :P.

But you're on Newgrounds and we love your music because we aren't mainstream anyway :D.

Rawrthaas responds:

Exciting proposition, old bean =]

[DJ Opaix - Better Off Alo]

Good Remix

Pretty good job. Mixing could be improved... but I'm a noob so I don't know exactly what to do... :)

It seems there is a stray note between 1:41 and 1:42. At the end it might be a good idea to include a bar of silence, just so resonance/echo can fade out. Making things sound bigger by varying pitch, loudness, resonance and balance or something like that might be a good idea too. I guess...

Well, I hope a said something that's at least a little helpful :D.

ElectroLord99 responds:

yeah dont worry bro, i'm a noob too :P and i didnt hear any extra notes anywhere... and the ending is ok in my opinion, meh i guess im losing my mind XD thanks for the constructive review ^^

[There's Something in Your Eye]

Seems No-one's said anything...

To me it feels as if what you are trying to "say" with the song might not be clear enough for people to associate with it. At the beginning, the piano is a *little* sloppy.

I'm a big fan of your music, thanks for sharing it with us too. :)

Mrmilkcarton responds:

Yes the piano is.