Potential
You have talent, practice makes perfect, so keep going.
Judged as follows:
Time | Score | What I thought
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0:00-0:42 3/5 Meh.
0:42-1:39 3/5 I like this a little.
1:39-1:56 4/5 It's getting better.
1:56-2:50 5/5 The melody kicks in, wow.
2:50-3:10 2/5 Oh, no.
3:10-3:45 4/5 Yey, song's back.
3:45-4:24 5/5 Kicks arse!
4:24-5:00 4/5 Getting boaring.
5:00-5:22 4/5 Needs some tweaking, but I like dirty.