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Potential

You have talent, practice makes perfect, so keep going.

Judged as follows:
Time | Score | What I thought
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0:00-0:42 3/5 Meh.
0:42-1:39 3/5 I like this a little.
1:39-1:56 4/5 It's getting better.
1:56-2:50 5/5 The melody kicks in, wow.
2:50-3:10 2/5 Oh, no.
3:10-3:45 4/5 Yey, song's back.
3:45-4:24 5/5 Kicks arse!
4:24-5:00 4/5 Getting boaring.
5:00-5:22 4/5 Needs some tweaking, but I like dirty.

Hmm....

Well, I don't really know what to say, but yeah, I think this is a good experiment.

I dare you though, to mix melody with "noise" and maybe even a whole tone scale, key changes or tempo changes, and create something with strong contrast that sucker-punches the listener throughout. XD

Lol. Anyway, you're doing good. I'm just wondering what you're going to do next. :D

culmor30 responds:

Mix melody with noise, you say? I might have to try that.

Spontaneous

High energy in this one, often those compositions done in the shortest time have the most life in them. I personally tend to over-think things when they take too long. As for what I mean with energy, even fast-paced songs can be dead emotionless -- this isn't.

culmor30 responds:

:D

and I just noticed it loops almost perfectly too.

Interesting

I guess this was an experiment.... Didn't like a lot of it, but what came after 1:35 really has potential.

culmor30 responds:

Yeah lol, just messing with all sorts of filters.

Eminent

Keep it heavy and dirty, this is awesome. Industrial music is tricky, but you got it down to a tee here.

culmor30 responds:

Good to know someone other than me likes it, my RL friends tell me to make more generic shit :[

Texture

Like the way you vary textures in all your music, great piece.

Thoroughly Pissed

Great song, know how you must have felt. Felt that way myself, and man, would something this indecent have made my day.

Seems on average, people are just a little too happy. :P

Awesome :)

Beautiful, and I'm sure, quite hard to get right. I'm a total noob, but I hope what I say might make sense, and if not, then at least provoke a thought. :P

Might the attack of the strings be a little too slow on the chords following the chord at the end of 0:52? Would variation on the attack provide more leverage for emotion?

Mrmilkcarton responds:

An instrument that held more of a melody would of lead to more emotion probably. I'm still working on understanding and faking classical music to sound real and good.

Brilliant Concept

Loved the concept, but I didn't really feel the full rage of the printer... I have a silly request though...

If you would like to, could you perhaps do a 20 second version of this? I would really like to do a little animation of it :D. I have a basic storyboard planned out (http://bit.ly/printer_jam), let me know what you think.

Love the song

It's just a little tricky to classify, it starts off as hard trance, then goes back to normal trance. This kinda sucker-punches the listener a bit. Which may, or may not be a good thing :P.

But you're on Newgrounds and we love your music because we aren't mainstream anyway :D.

Rawrthaas responds:

Exciting proposition, old bean =]

I'm an ex-communication design student and programmer with experience in more than 13 languages, excluding HTML, XML and the like. I'm currently working on learning what I can in the Indie game industry.

Jens @jtza8

Age 38, Male

Indie Student

South Africa, Earth

Joined on 2/20/09

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