Interesting
Doing something different every now and then is good :), it's when one learns the most IMHO.
What I'm about to say might just make you say WTF in confusion, as I'm pretty good at not making sense when being abstract. Simply focus on the cause as opposed to the effect of what I'm saying and it might make sense. :P
Sometimes there's a sense of ambiance that swallows me whole in music, something like ghosts haunting me. I can't see it, but I sure as hell can feel it. That's what this piece might need more of (depending on what you were going for).
It's like listening to a cold wind, and feeling it getting bloody cold. Or like listening to birds in a forest, and feeling lost in a huge space. In this way, music creates a sense of synaesthesia that everyone experiences.
The infamous MrMilkcarton did this rather well when he wrote music for the game "Penguinz" (see http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/221910).
Regardless, what you have here is good, and it's always a pleasure reviewing your music. =)