Good Remix
Pretty good job. Mixing could be improved... but I'm a noob so I don't know exactly what to do... :)
It seems there is a stray note between 1:41 and 1:42. At the end it might be a good idea to include a bar of silence, just so resonance/echo can fade out. Making things sound bigger by varying pitch, loudness, resonance and balance or something like that might be a good idea too. I guess...
Well, I hope a said something that's at least a little helpful :D.
yeah dont worry bro, i'm a noob too :P and i didnt hear any extra notes anywhere... and the ending is ok in my opinion, meh i guess im losing my mind XD thanks for the constructive review ^^
Brilliant
It's like warm sun in a cold winter :). Love the base... and excellent mixing.
Seems No-one's said anything...
To me it feels as if what you are trying to "say" with the song might not be clear enough for people to associate with it. At the beginning, the piano is a *little* sloppy.
I'm a big fan of your music, thanks for sharing it with us too. :)
Yes the piano is.
Great Work
Firstly, this is a beautiful piece, as for critique, it feels as if the piece looses a little momentum in the middle. I get that it's a little more sneaky than at the start, but still, I would recommend a little more punch. Maybe throwing in an unexpected twist of some sort, or something would help? The end is good.
Still, great job.
Great Work
The only thing that I would suggest is using a compressor or something to reduce the distortion on some parts of the track.
Awesome Song
There is only one thing that I could suggest, the first time the word castles is mentioned, it might be drowned out a little. 10/10 :)
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