Beautiful, Contemplative
Awesome music, congratulations :D. IMHO 8 minutes isn't too long for something as relaxed as this. I mean, some of the classical composers have songs that go on for longer, and they seem to have done allright :P.
Just two little clean-up pointers (if they'd matter to you):
%u2022 I hear mouse clicks. :P (e.g. at the end of the song).
%u2022 The mandolin "pluck" gets clipped a little but the panning of the pluck is an excellent touch.
5/5
9/10