Yeah, this was great!
Well Done, Indeed
I love the story in this film as it made sense. I agree that it's a little long at the beginning. However, it's very well cut together - cohesive - and that makes it good. Though I don't entirely agree with the film's advice. :P
Impressive animation, even better music. I'm freaking out about how good the music is.
I always like to receive a constructive critique with my work, so I'll try my best here. There is only one irrelevant point that I noticed.
In the scene where the guy blows all the spikes off his body, some of them stick into the impenetrable box. From an artistic point of view I can see exactly why that happened. The only critique I can give is that it might undermine the indestructibility of the box by a very small amount. Still, it's not a fault at all, it's just something that was interesting to me.
Great work, though, stunning!
I especially liked the cat bat ... or ... bat cat.
People don't watch the entire series. They don't read! After all that, they are still perfectly willing to give a biased review. I guess some people just don't get it. Which is very sad. :P
Brilliant, Exceptional, Awesome, and MUCH, more!
Flash or not, this is one of those rare films that leave me without words.
There is nothing more I can say other than that. :)
Things that could make this better are a pre-loader (feels more professional) and a letterbox technique that works (though why you would want a letterbox I don't know). It would also be nice if the film didn't repeat on its own.
Publishing things on Newgrounds makes it public, and the public usually expect a polished product. Thus, I just can't give this a great rating.
The animation is really good though, just don't let it down by leaving out the technical stuff.
I'm doing a course in 3D as well. I have to say that I can see the amount of work that went into this. I know how hard it is, and I appreciate you sharing it with us.
As for my critique, I think that the animation could be slightly better. The anticipation when he is about to walk off the box could have been stronger, the walk cycle at the start feels a little strange, and the shoulders are a too high when he is pulling.
Still, this is REALLY good work.
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